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NaPoWriMo 5: "Hope"

In your heart sits a pretty little bird
Amidst all fears its song can be heard

Bigger the trouble that comes to hound
The louder you need it's sweetest sound

When nothing remains at the end of the day
Just listen to it, and you will find your way

It grants the strength to forge destiny anew
Yet it will never even ask a tiny crumb of you
NaPoWriMo 5: Hope
Today's prompt was: "Find an Emily Dickinson poem – preferably one you’ve never previously read – and take out all the dashes and line breaks. Make it just one big block of prose. Now, rebreak the lines. Add words where you want. Take out some words. Make your own poem out of it! "

I chose this one: www.poetryfoundation.org/poem/…
Because- well, its perfect and none of my efforts would ever match up to that. So no need to feel bad for myself. See? Hope can always be found in unlikely places.
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NaPoWriMo 4: Fault in our stars

I'm standing here numb clutching these flowers
How long has it been? Just minutes or hours?

They come one by one and talk about you
I know they except me to go and do so too

How can I say what I had long ago planned
When all I really want is to hold your hand

Despite your wishes, you have left me with scars
Perhaps just another of those faults in our stars.
NaPoWriMo 4: Fault in our stars
The prompt was: " write a “loveless” love poem. Don’t use the word love! And avoid the flowers and rainbows. And if you’re not in the mood for love? Well, the flip-side of the love poem – the break-up poem – is another staple of the poet’s repertoire. If that’s more your speed at present, try writing one of those, but again, avoid thunder, rain, and lines beginning with a plaintive “why”? Try to write a poem that expresses the feeling of love or lovelorn-ness without the traditional trappings you associate with the subject matter."

I recently re-read 'Fault in our stars' for the I-don't-know-how-many-th time and my first reaction to this prompt was, I want to write how Gus would feel if he survived Hazel Grace instead of the other way around.

The poem is sort of pushing the boundaries set by the prompt, I know, but it was the best I could do as of now. It still needs work. If anyone has any ideas, please note me, or comment!
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NaPoWriMo 3: About Bats and the Batman

After sunset do the bats take flight
Batman also roams around at night
But doesn't he know its un-bat-ly
To go looking for a random fistfight?

Bats wear black leathery shawls
In black the batman also prowls
But doesn't he know its un-bat-ly
To speak in deep guttural growls?

Bats hate snakes for spoiling their show
With 'King Snake' batman also had a row
But doesn't he know its un-bat-ly
To have some joker for his bitterest foe?

Raves in a cave bats love to attend
Batman also digs this cave-y trend
But doesn't he know its un-bat-ly
To hang with an old Fox as a friend?

Bats are awesome, we must admit
Though some traits batman does omit
But shouldn't he take classes from me
To notch his bat-ass-ness up a bit?
NaPoWriMo 3: About Bats and Batman
Since it's holiday today, I thought I'll try out the weekly challenge by the NaPoWriMo  group.

The challenge was: 
Bullet; Red  Hit the random deviation button, and write a poem based on (or inspired by) the poem you find.

So I got this: marionator4.deviantart.com/jou…
Not a poetry, but a journal update.
It made no sense, it made me laugh and it featured the Batman in it. Enough to get anybody's mental gears churning.

So Marionator4 , please keep inspiring random poets!
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NaPoWriMo 2: Bigger on the outside

I'm lying in the grass
On a warm summer's night
As overhead they amass
With hypnotic, flickering light

I make up my own games
With Sirius, Rigel, Betelgeuse
Kindling imagination's flames
On the gentle soothing breeze

I remember dreamy stories told
By Asimov, Adams, Herbert, Clark
Somewhere out there they unfold
Distant planets amongst the dark

It's staggering to think that the travel
Between two stars of any constellation
Will take longer than it took to unravel
The entire history of human civilization

As I lie peacefully in the grass
My fears vanish, ego turns tail
And all my worries seem so crass
Next to universe's gigantic scale
NaPoWriMo 2: Bigger on the outside
I finished it sooner than the last! Only 2 hours late. ;P

It's based on the prompt on the napowrimo website: poem about stars. Inspiration was the feel you get when you lie down under the starry sky and get lost somewhere between constellations.
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NaPoWriMo 1 : Bunny

Can there be an actual rabbit?
Without the nervous twitchy habit,
Without being a cuddly fur ball,
Without the dumbness to appall?

That's why it's kinda funny
That my favorite rabbit is bugs bunny

(For a rabbit) he's freakishly tall
And he wins every single bout
with style, smart-ass and gall
That raises a certain doubt

How is he so popular with the kids
When he isn't that cute and fluffy
And against all expectations (From a rabbit)
Is as cool as vampire-slaying Buffy!
NaPoWriMo 1: Bunny
Technically, I wrote it 3 hours after April 1st was over but what the heck.

It's based on the prompt on the napowrimo website: poem of negation. It's based on my favorite rabbit, who isn't actually much like an ordinary rabbit at all. So there is negation there somewhere :)
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fotografka Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks for :+fav::tighthug::happybounce:
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AnuPdin Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011
you are very welcome! :)
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Brian-B-Photography Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you for Faveing
Heres a:iconllamajumpplz:in return
Wanna Trade-em?
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AnuPdin Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011
lol what do u mean? im kinda a noob so dont know all the secrects of deviatart yet ;P
for instance i cant make the jumping llama like u can :(
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Brian-B-Photography Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
All I mean is that if you would like to you could give me a llama as well
They are free to give
and the jumper is easy Place a : before and after iconllamajumpplz :iconllamajumpplz:
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AnuPdin Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011
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CumbriaCam Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011   Photographer
Tnx for the :+fav:! :)
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NarutoPants Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for all your comments! heres a Llama for ya :)
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AnuPdin Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011
lol thanx a lot!!
your painting style is awesome! tips plz!! :D
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NarutoPants Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha np... and I am terrible at tips and tutorials and stuff like that, but tell me what you wish to know specifically and I shall try my best to explain :)
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